final essay project # 3
paragraph #1-what is the south central like today???what is good about south central?????
In south central now have a lots of danger in the community……south central has a lots of violences…..In south central have a lots of gangs…south central is a bad community that i have seen before i came here…..the good thing about south central is that i like some parks that is in the community……also south central have a lots of stores where you can buy thing ex: clothes ,shoes,and etc…..one most thing i like about south central is that a lots of people lives here…you can find new people you can meet them and you can be there friends……. Thesis: the three most important events that have had the greatest impact on making south central,LA what is today are more gangs,more violences,and more danger for people who lives there………
paragraph #2-what is the first event that has made south central what it is today???describe the event why it is important???
my first event that has made south central what it is today is that south central now ave more gangs in the community…..The people who lives there some do not have a good education…..the people who are in gangs they dont care what they do with their lifes…..in south central people now write in the walls….people who are in those things they also are a bad influnces to the little kids who also lives there…..in south central people make the weed or they use drugs those people who are in gangs they destroy their own future……
paragraph #3-what is the second events that has made south central what it is today????describe the event…why it is important????
my second events that has made south central what it is today is now south central has more violence…….south central has killed people who also are innocent…..they killed people just for be mean……the violence in south central has increase more because now the police also wants to threat people bad……
paragraph #4-what is the third event that ha made south central what it is today?????describe the event….why it is important????
my third event that has made south central what it is today is now south central has more danger….south central has danger because people they wanted like that……people who lives in south central they could be killed by others……in south central also have people who take urs things without permission…..i think south central they dont have strong rules so the people they don’t do that…..
paragrah #5 conclusion
i think that south central is bad a dont like to live here because is alots of danger,has a lots of violences and i dont like that….i like to live in a community that dont have those things
good website
what makes a good website????
to make a good website you need to put somes pictures and some music.
soccer is my life.the topic our group is soccer.one positive in the community it keeps you healthy. APRIL 21 2010.



